I'm not sure about this passage:
"he narrowly avoids being discovered byJin Yoshida hiding behind the door. Keeping his head down, he manages to crawl his way to the next vault door down the hallway and evade the Proxy"
Isn't this being too specific and descriptive? The player doesn't necessary keep their head down or crawl their way down the hallway. This passage is inconsistent with the rest of the wiki's writing style. I haven't deleted it but I feel it should be. Tikalal (talk) 08:29, January 3, 2016 (UTC)